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kurtrellianskurtrelliansalmost 18 years ago
Almost believable

You created a believable and fantastical scenario. God forbid real life was ever quite like this, but our latent passions are all there. Like the scenario, and the erotic scene at the end very well written. I would be interested to find how the rest of her life turns out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
good

well written but loosing virginity doesnt always hurt :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Huh

An incest filled crappy future for women? Sounds utterly depressing. Would’ve preferred some kind of warning that it was an incest story.

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