All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium Pt. 07: The Proposal'

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SupportMain420SupportMain420almost 6 years ago

This seems a little bit rushed... No hate or anything just saying. Still gave 5 stars, because I know you can do better! Otherwise, love how it turned out for Patrick and Nassira <3

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great, a bit quick pace but great

Loved it, especially the last part "My neighbors are really going to hate us." could almost imagine it. Can't wait for the next part

ticklishsolesticklishsolesalmost 6 years ago
Amazing

Oh lucky Patrick. Now I so wish to experience what he did but only bound to the very point of immobility.

Ticklishsoles

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

If that isn’t a trust fall then I don’t know what one is.

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...