All Comments on 'Lilith's Emporium - Wishes Ch. 05'

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ender2k2kender2k2kalmost 5 years ago
A satisfying ending to a good story

Thanks, well done.

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomealmost 5 years ago

Perfect ending. You pulled that off perfectly. I have warm fuzzies - sexy ones.

maestro84maestro84almost 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

I do enjoy happy endings, (no pun intended)

calx86calx86almost 5 years ago

Awesome job. Absolutely loved this series. Thank you!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Perfect

Last chapter ended rather abruptly, but I knew would come through and you did with flying colors. Bravo. Best series in you Lilith Emporium anthology. Keep it up.

MrKnightlyWriterMrKnightlyWriteralmost 5 years ago
Sweet ending

Happy ending for the win!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Story

I just wish this chapter having more pages. More of them, only one page just making me unsatisfied like many things remain untold to get enjoy them more.

maestro84maestro84almost 5 years agoAuthor
Length

When it comes to writing I am never thinking about how many pages it is going to be, I just write until I feel the story is finished and then I upload it and it is what it is.

RobcolesRobcolesalmost 5 years ago
Outstanding as always 😁

I wish I had a tenth of your creative flair. Fantastic story yet again, I love this series.

PutchiePutchieabout 2 years ago

awesome story! Read the whole 5 chapters in one go!

SatyrDickSatyrDickabout 2 years ago

Cute and Fun!

10/10!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

And a playful and loving ending, perfection.

Nighthawk1953Nighthawk19538 months ago

I really enjoyed reading this story. It made me smile frequently with some of the antics. Thank you!

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Have a lot of strange fantasies, just throwing them out there for others to enjoy. Also I know my Grammar isn't perfect and I an constantly trying to improve it. Also to help because the site organizes my stories in a confusing way. Mood slime: to read the series in order it...

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