All Comments on 'Lilly Ch. 01'

Anxious to hear more about Lily and her exploits. Creampies are the hottest with stories like this

I WISH I WAS THAT GIRL.

I really like this story! Please keep writing! The only thing that I didn't like was the grammar. If you want, I'm not an English major by any means but I can do some rough editing for you.

So while reading this no matter how good the plot was the damn errors made me lose focus on the plot and I found myself getting really distracted by them. There are quite a number of them.