by MissLisaJones
I love how she finally surrendered to the pain and use she really wanted.
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the only reason I gave this 3 stars is because it was written well, but other than that I did not like the story line, in my opinion there is no such thing as mild BDSM, and the story was also ruined by the use of the word mistress
I usually have trouble reading BDSM stories (although the first series I read on this site was a wonderful BDSM story which opened my eyes to the whole thing) because to be totally honest, BDSM scares the hell out of me. But I am enjoying this. It's above all, a wonderful lesbian love story, which is what I love to read. ~ L
I am very glad to have accidentally stumbled on to this series. Somehow, I'm beyond regarding this as a BDSM story, but I am not reading it as I would any literary work. And it really is an amasing piece of work! I can only pray that someone with enough guts, talent and vision reads this and makes a motion picture out of it. Not a porno, because that's not what this is, but a drama about two lonely people who found eachother and are both bending over backwards (literally and figuratively) to make the relationship work. As far as the story goes so far... It's perfect. Unfortunately I can't give it more than 5 stars, but really isn't enough.
to be allowed to read such a wonderful story. MissLisa is not just a very talented bdsm writer she is an extremely talented writer full stop.
it is an honour and a privilege to copy edit for an author as fine as Grandmistress Lisa Jones. I'm really sorry I can't share our e-correspondence as GMLJ develops the story, but the care, dedication and craft that GMLJ brings to the work set a very high bar for any who publish here. My contribution is minimal. Brava to the Mistress!
But much older...inner torment fighting the knowledge of what I want vs. who I should be. For the last 3 hours, I've read every chapter of this beautifully written story and the overwhelming need for more is indescribable. Thank you MissLisa. Thank you so much.
I like to read good stories and this is well written and realistic.Karen expressing two directly opposite tendencies is very interesting.She's an old fashion prude, yet she wants to please Jude. I like how Jude removes the choice for Karen giving her the justification that she was forced. but in reality she really wants to experiences. What a dilemma!! Good job,looking to forward to next chapter