by Lindat817
Another excellent story for this series. It's very well written. The desciptions and the narrative, together with the conversations, lead to wonderful climaxes.
Thank you Linda - we have waited for years for another story from you and you didn't disappoint. 5 stars.
I think you sort of ruined what was a very good first two stories, by making her son a cheating asshole, then the whole three-way thing was almost as bad as when you had that foursome stuff in the earlier stuff from 10 years ago. Swing and a miss.
I read the first story years ago, missed the second one. But I just finished reading all three of them. Thank you for sharing them with us and I would love to read a 4th chapter to this.
Excellent wsy to continue this story!!
After that build up there has to be a Chapter 4!!!
Can't wait to read Ch 4. Hope to see you write more often. You are an excellent author. Thanks!
Another masterpiece Linda. It’s not as great as the first two, but still a great story. Would have liked more of the stuff from the interim before the trip. Please bring Ch 4 soon!
Very good story. Four Stars from me. I hope Ch. 4 has Teri and her father, Mark and his mother, all four hooking up in a family foursome. Just don’t wait 11 years to post .......
That chapter was so unexpected! I loved it!! Please let there be a chapter four cumming soon! Five stars and a favorite point!
I hope you will continue this excellent adventure. I like the characters and story. Thank you.
This story is absolutely HOT. Your words painted some very erotic, arousing pictures. Thank you.
First off thank you!!!
For continuing with the amazing series.....And yes please.....more chapters is most definitely requested......
Excellent series. So well written. You need to do another. You have really set this up nicely to get Linda and Terri's father together and make it an incestous family
I disagree with anonymous above. The son didn’t cheat - and Linda was careful to make sure he didn’t. He had his wife’s permission. And the “foursome” he mentioned was actually two twosomes that were careful not to not mix. 5 stars.
Please continue! This a great story with a lot of possibilities to it. Thank you!
I read chapter 1 & 2 some years ago , and was disappointed that there were no more chapters , imagine my surprise to find 10 years on a new chapter and it was well worth the wait , brilliantly written well paced and easily worth 10 stars if i could , but please please please do not make me wait another 10 years for chapter 4 , thankyou for your time given to our enjoyment .
Thank you,one of the best story's I have ever read on here. I hope you do a chapter 4 I know it would be great!!!!
Well paced narrative. First person perspective handled nicely. And there is the additional benefit of trying to determine the real from the fantasy.
I hope that this is actually your story Linda, it is amazing! Thank you for sharing with us
Enjoyed re-reading the original stories and this latest update. Thanks for sharing and like many others who have taken time to comment, a further chapter would be most welcome and well received.
For ten years I've been waiting and hoping for more to this story. I've sent you private mesages, begging you to continue. THANK YOU for this. I've got a serious thing for my mom and her panties, since I was a teen like your son. Now in my 50's and mom is 76 and I still fantasize about it. I"m sure she knowa, as I still steal a pair and masturbate them ehenever I get a chance to visit. I leave them int her panty drawer, filled with my cum, as a gift. Always hoping she'll say or o something but she never does. Whenever I leav, I hope she will 'accidentally' slip a fresh pair into my suitcase, but alas - I'm not as fortunate as Mark!
Looking forward to hearing more - you've got a special thing going and I love your style!
After having read your stories (many times) years ago, I am so happy to hear an update, and have a continuation chapter! Although my own story involves a many year loving relationship with a sibling... I always love to hear stories, fantasies, or just complete fiction about the unique and amazing sexual relationships that can only occur between close family members. Soo happy that you/ the characters have found a way to move forward in life and find a balanced way to remain both close and happy. Like many other readers I would love to hear about what happens next for all of you. Congrats on another great great installment to what is considered a classic (crazy that it's been that long, right?) series in the "Incest/Taboo" genre. Tysm
If I may call you Linda, you did a great job as a talented writer. BRAVO, BRAVO, BRAVO. I just spent a wonderful day because of your words, rereading Chapters 1 and 2, and was a taken with them even more than the first time. As a writer, when I read another writer's work, I love to read it thoughtfully, because when a piece can grab you, and you recognize that you have been transported into the story, it is damn good. When I began reading Chapter 3 after my rereads I was a little thrown off by Matt's roughness with you in sex when he came to see you, but that just disappeared in this excellent new Chapter. I did suspect before hand that Teri would somehow become a cohort in sex with you and Matt, but I kept thinking her father would play a role. Then you mention that same thing at the ending of 3. You must not when such a long time for Chapter 4 and more, because no reader of your work to date can wait I am certain. Marvelous talent you have dear lady. JEF
Linda you have a gift, please continue writing. Your story gave me a great deal of pleasure. Thank you
You write well and and your story is very enjoyable. I hope there is a Chapter 4.
Linda. I found your stories very well written and craft fully paced. The build of the characters and the interactions seems so real than I can taste it. I could not think of a better compliment. I really hope that is a chapter four in a near future. Regardless it is a real treat to read. Kudos
Hard to tell where the truth ends and the fantasy begins! I had read the original stories a few (!) years back and it was nice to get reacquainted with Linda, Mark, and Anne and Tom. Having an additional chapter made the journey that much sweeter. Hopefully there will be a Part IV!
From the first chapter to the third one ever bit off the story so enticing n the moments where there was a sexually tention being raised between any one of them it just raised the sexual feeling in every reader who has read all three parts.
The reader who have read all 3 parts r surly n eargerly waiting for the 4th part and am sure it may or may not happen as the next story should happen when ever it occurs. Till then would really like to read some different stories from you..
“Linda’s Discovery” is a very well-written story that has some of the best sex scenes I’ve ever read. I certainly hope there will be more chapters added in the not-to-distant future.
Again, the descriptions and the progress of the action is such that you are not outlining fantasies but rather recalling actual events. In my view, this reality check adds to the overall quality of the writing.
I also enjoyed the way you introduced this 3rd chapter. It is the epilogue of the 2nd chapter that is pushed back and it is an excellent way to introduce the new section. Congrats.
5*
BJ
another awesome addition!! i think i may have read the other chapters yrs ago under another name, im so glad u have continued this, and hope there will be a chapter 4 and maybe more.......5*
Linda, you have knocked it out of the part again. I first read chapters 1 and 2 a couple of years ago but just finished reading them again. Glad I did because I found you've added the third chapter and have enjoyed it very much as well. Another five star story, so thanks again.
Tanks for your awesome continuation. I hope there will be other chapters ...
I loved all three stories and cannot wait for CH04..loved the wife, mother and son especially
I always wondered where you'd got to.
Excellent, hope there's more in due course. Xx
Thank you for sharing your experiences and I hope there’s a chapter 4
Thank you for the wonderful update! Will keep checking back for other stories or more chapters of this one :-)
Awesome story, thank you for coming back to it after so long, hopefully we don’t have to wait 11 years for more
Wonderful series albeit spread over such a long time,. Pleeeeze don't make us wait so long for Pt 4...
And thank you.
Lovely story makes you wish you could be part of a story like that what a wish please do a final part
It was a long wait for Ch 3.. but, good things are worth waiting for. hope you do give an update in the near future.
Three very well written stories. May there be future chapters. Regardless, may you always find joy and peace.
Olá Lindat817, sou novo aqui, esse é meu primeiro comentário. Bem sua história é maravilhosamente bem narrada e excitante, adorei todos os três capítulos, me deixou feliz que você desenvolveu todas as situações de sedução e provocação da mãe com o seu filho de forma muito bem construída em uma crescente de tensão e tesão até culminar no envolvimento dos dois como amantes.
Você é muito talentosa e criativa!
Aguardo com boas expectativas outras histórias suas. Um Abraço!
So glad you started to write again after so many years and I hope there is more to come. Love to know what Anne and Tom have been up to also.
Hi,,,,It`s great that you have written another story,,,,I loved the first ones,,,I feel there`s more mothers that have had some thoughts about this,,more than would actually admit to it. I hope there will be more stories in the future,,saty safe and I`ll be on the lookout for them,,,,D
Possibly one of the longest, drawn out part 2 (or in this case, part 3) that I have ever seen.
Nice to see you back again. Thank you for taking the time to write this out. I quite enjoyed reading it.
xxx
Well crafted and perfectly presented. You manage to give us just enough teasing titillation and erotic stimulation without ever being in danger of going over the top. This understated approach together with the openness, honesty and empathy of your characters is as refreshing as it is erotic.
Each little sexual step with Teri was so equanImous they brilliantly sparkled. The scrupulous description of bodies and sexual acts made the reader present. Probably the best Chapter story ever on Literotica. I've been reading incest since 1974 and this fits the elite category.
FYI- The introduction of Jim at the end gave so many friends with benefits possibilities.
Great writing and plot development. After waiting 11 years for part 3 I hope we don't have to wait that long for part 4. Teri, Mark and the parents should drive us readers crazy.
I am so glad you shared this update. I recall wishing for this when I first read Parts 1 & 2 years ago. Great writing! Encourage you to invest the time in Part 4 and eventually Part 5.. (wishful thinking!)
Nigel in the UK
ALL READ. THANK YOU.
Catch up with you some time in the very near future.
I can't believe it took 11 years to wtite this. A sequel might be nice. However, you should continue to write. Your character development is terrific and the sex is believable.
Interesting how everyone seems to need women with D or more breasts. Bs are also nice, as are Cs and even As. More realistic.
Finally! A sequel to one of. The hottest stories on Lit. Love this one just as much. Keep.writing!
The best ways family can get closer to one another..................sharing is caring..............xxxxx
Fantastic! One of the best porn stories, if not the best, I have ever read. Thank you!
I have no words for how amazing this trilogy is. I loved this reunion story. I'm glad everyone was able to be so comfortable and close with eachother!
I loved the 3 story series. 5 stars for each story. I like the story lines, characters, character development, sexual development and action. I especially like the fact that the stories start and end on an upbeat note with the characters respecting and loving each other, no debauchery.
I would like to see 2 additional stories. One with Linday and her dsughter in law's father getting together and interaction with the daughter in law. The second with Mark, Teri, Linda, and Jim getting together. Possibly somehow addingAnnie to the group.
Well i didn't see that coming. Definitely a twist from 10 years ago. But i did like the high level of Intimacy between the 2 women. The author has suggested there may possibly be a 4th chapter. With the introduction of Teri and so many unknowns about her past, her family dynamics (siblings?), her dad entering the picture, etc, this could easily become a lengthy series if the author so chooses. I gave all 3 chapters a 5.
She must get together with her daughter-in-law’s father and marry him. That would then make Mark and Terri legally married brother and sister with an added play on the incest theme.
Perfect, great writing, imagination and a perfect level of sensuality and eroticisim, LOVE it x
5 stars for all chapters. One of the best stories of this type i have ever read. would love you to write another chapter or two
WOW... I am at a loss for words...this is the best chapter. Please tell me this is true and restore my faith that family is the most important thing in this world.
Kitűnő írás. Minden részt elolvastam és megadtam rá az 5 csillagot. Remélem Linda meggondolod és folytatod minden olvasód elvárja. Gratulálok és várom a folytatást és az új írásaid is.
Szeretettel ölellek.
L hope there is more to add. Would love to hear of a four way. Dad fucking daughter son fucking mom. then everyone cleaning each other parts. Y ou know Mark and Tim cleaned each other so why not Mark and dad put on a show.
This is my second time reading this work. It is well. done and very hot. Thanks
Five stars across the board. One of the best stories I’ve ever read. Please, please continue it!! You have something special here!
Supremely well-written.
It's not a cut to the chase thing. There is tension, heat, anticipation and lust. Take this paragraph:
'Teri was staring at me and I could see her eyes getting a little wider, considering the idea that her own mother-in-law was suggesting they masturbate together. I didn't want to think too much about it and realize how crazy the whole idea was... but in my foggy state of mind, it seemed perfectly sane."
Two women eyeing each other, the mother of Mark and his wife, alone and lusting for him and each other. And the build up is terrific as is the fulfillment of all the perversions lurking in this sample, and more.
Of course, we now have MILF Manor streaming to indulge incest further, but nothing beats Lindat817 for quality arousal.
PLEASE continue this story! Very well told. Very hot. So glad to see you returned to it.