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This is primarily present tense, but you keep drifting into past. It is far easier to maintain past tense than present. When we tell or write a story -- whether fact or fiction -- it is usually to tell something that already happened, so past tense is more natural and easy to maintain -- unless the writer is really, really, really good.

Linda you naughty mom. It is a hot story. I wonder the pay sounds ok would you keep it up? Sounds like the boyfriend is a fucktoy, no need to limit yourself.