by ms_ktygirl
This is definitely one of the best first time stories I've read in a while. The setting was perfect, and the storyline was amazing. I hope you'll be writing a chapter 2!!
that was one of the best most beautifully written stories i've seen
Wow- that was awesome-- thats all i can think to say. I could totally place myself in Lindsays shoes... I am her- almost, except for being the extrememly lucky girl to have a man like that. Maybe someday. Thanks for that story. It was the best i've ever read.
As my title says it's awesome that was one of the best First Time stories I've read keep on writen' em'! haha
I loved your story. First off I was just looking for a story with my name in it, for kicks, and that is when I stumbled upon your story. The dialog, atmosphere, and erotica was perfect to the nature of the story. I thoroughly enjoyed her mindset, she was innocent ... yet not so. A second chapter would be greatly appreciated.
x0x Lindsay.
I think most people at one point in their lives fantasise about thier teacher...Any chance you'll ever be writing a chapter 2 of the story? It would be interesting to see what happens in their fledgling relationship.
romantic, a little heavy on the dialogue. I enjoyed the overall story.