All Comments on 'Lions Dance'

You do have a talent for short, sweet, to-the-point perfection.

Good story , I like it. AAAA++++

As brilliant as ever Mr Oggbashan - you are a fantastic writer

Please do an update or a longer part 2

Good story!

5

Too short, too quick.

Two people who have known each other for a long time suddenly decide they are right for each other and get engaged just like tan. A more realistic story would have them more slowly realising that it was each other they wanted.

Thank you for another entertaining and thought-provoking story. I appreciate your economy of words.

Nice story. I like that it is short and sweet, and succinct and terse. The style is kind of "matter of fact" with a natural progression of events.

Short and simple, always works best.

Sweet and enjoyable tale, ogg, with two long-time friends realizing what they've always missed and going for it. I like the Lions tie-in, too, reminding me of Lions' events back in my hometown and of a Lions concert on the square below Kilkenny Castle. Doing good for others can help bring people together, too. 4.5*, rounded up.

To "Anonymous 14 days ago Too short, too quick."

You have every right to be critical but instead of being a critic, why don't you write your own stories? I'll bet your sexual performance is described by your comment.

That was a lovely little romp. Good job Ogg!

Nice story, full of great possibilities, excellent for SVD.

Another good one.