All Comments on 'Lion's Den Ch. 06'

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beibeegyrl_109beibeegyrl_109over 11 years ago
finaly....

dancing on aiw with this latest update..cant wait for Laney's sequel...

fluerfluerover 11 years ago

Thanks for sharing this wonderful story. I am looking foward to Laney's story.

nadaliwnadaliwover 11 years ago
Well worth the wait....

It was nice to read how you wrapped up Max and Leo's story. And hopefully in the future read about Laney's love triangle.

*****

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Christmas came early!

Gurl, thank you for wrapping up this wonderful story. Every king needs a bad ass chick at his side. No crying and wringing her hands with worry...not our Max. You took having your man's back to another level...loved it!

Chelle

partial2passionpartial2passionover 11 years ago
soo great!

This was one of those stories that stuck with me... and I was sooooo sadden when I thought there wouldn't be a final chapter. Thank you soooo much for finishing this. This chapter had it all; the crazy love, the wild sex, guns, loyalty, trust, family. GREAT job and hope to see Laney's story soon.

-p2p

KayladoeKayladoeover 11 years ago
OMG

This cannot be the end like I totally love it I hope you will make a sequel to it this is I'm very very good did you I hope you can make more like this

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing!!!!!

It was well worth the wait!!!!!! You wrapped it up so well,thanx so much,ur one talented writer!!! Can't wait 4 Laney's story! Plz hurry!!!

MsShaybabeMsShaybabeabout 11 years ago
Wow....

This is my second time reading this story.....it is amazing...I love it!

angel1990angel1990about 11 years ago
ohhhhhhhhh so great

this was 4th time reading this story and it was even better than the first..............i just love it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Aww shux!

"You say that you would kill me if I ever broke your heart. Ditto. You feel me.".... I felt that! THIS WAS AN AMAZIBG SERIES!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
I love this story!!!

I am booking a flight to Italy ; )

snowgirl714snowgirl714over 10 years ago
Laneys Story

Please, Please, Please give us Laneys story.

chocolatesistachocolatesistaover 10 years ago
so good

i agree laney needs her own story but i loved this series loved, loved and loved it some more. i will reread this again, thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Awesome

This is the best story I've read on literotica and I have read many. I hope you got this story written into a book and it is some where out there. I love, love Leo just needed to say that.

FirediamondFirediamondover 9 years ago
Laney

Laney has been getting more tail in this series than anyone else! Hahaha

CYNNARACYNNARAover 9 years ago
LANEY'S STORY!!!

Oh you know you gotta do Laney's story.

Three ex fuck buddies in the same room?!!!!!

Damn!!!

Laney's pussy must be platinum coated!!!

Hahahahahahahahahahaha........

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

What a story! Fomation start to finish!

Ellienora35Ellienora35over 6 years ago
Laney’s story

Are you going to write Laney’s story? You have set it up so well

LittlelottaloveLittlelottalovealmost 6 years ago
Loved it

I love the entire series. It was very detailed. Dramatic. Sexy. An over the top!

Max frustrated me though for this ending. Honestly, she deserved way more then just one spanking with some cuffs. Leo -was too damn nice on her for that one. Then again She did what she believed was best for her family. Plus I’m a sucker for a dominant man.

As for Laney, girl seemed to innocent until that ending. Haha! And she calls Max the mischievous one? Not only did she have the Russian and Pauley but Alejandro? Mhm I wonder if they’ll share her... doubt it. Though I like the idea of her with the Russian. Go get some of dat rough voice.

What’s gonna happen to Ari?

How will baby Luca go through life?

I got questions for daysss

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