by jake60
Not convoluted and pretty predictable, but it is nice to just read a pleasant romance story that wanders along to the happily ever after conclusion.
Not up to your normal standard. I know it's a love story, but a bigger context could have created a bigger playing field and more tension, more interest,
Thank you sir, for a very entertaining time. I enjoyed the story and looked forward to each chapter. I wasn't disappointed.
Well written, good read, great story thread. I will be looking for your future posts.
Thanks for Sharing
i must say i believe to be a good writer you have to be at least 60. i have read the first few of your stories and found all of them to be very tasteful and wonderful reads.
What a beautiful story regarding a couple that was destined to be! If only all of us could become this fortunate.
A wonderful worthwhile story. A few holes 'here 'n there' but very enjoyable.
Very good character development. Logically consistent plot and likable characters. Well done!
This was an amazing story on sooooo many different levels, BRAVO to our scribe...
Thank You for Sharing Your Talents with us. :)
I usually am not into romantic stories but I got to say this was well worth the read. ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Yes, this was a very good love story. This story took 2 broken people and let them fix each other. It proves that the whole is more than the sum of the parts.
Yes, the story was a little slow going for awhile but it succeeded in capturing my interest. I was rooting for both of these fine people. Thank you for a very entertaining and enjoyable story.
This was a difficult story to write considering the subject matter. This story should be on everyone's read list. The writing is at a pace that the subject matter deserves. It is not rushed but tracks the emotional level very well. Another thing Jake60 does extremely well is convey realistic images along with the story. Thanks for a wonderful story.
Ranks as one of the best stories I have read. Not too long and broken down to easily read portions. Great job! 5 stars
The story is long, but it didn’t seem that way. Congratulations on a very sensitive and believable handling of a difficult subject.
Great story, I would gladly watch it if it were to be made into a movie or a short series