All Comments on 'Lipstick on a Pig'

by davidwatts

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Scorpio1144Scorpio1144over 19 years ago
A great way to go, when the time comes.

As an older guy I hope never to find myself in the position of being old and alone. If, however, Elaine or someone like her is how I transition ... that wouldn't be a bad way to go.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Merry Christmas

Good Story David and Happy Holidays to you and yours also!

Vampiric_MirageVampiric_Mirageover 19 years ago
Great Story!

Excellent twist at the end. When I die I hope I die smiling, whether it be from reality or fantasy, I'm not sure I care. Keep writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Sometimes Christmas is sad

Terrific story. Christmas is supposed to be happy, but for some (and you know who you are) it is a very sad time... one of sad memories of violence, or lost loves, or deaths in the family. Your story fits this catagory, it was so poignant. Have a peaceful Christmas.

Ghost BearGhost Bearover 19 years ago
Very good story

A very good Christmas story about a lonely man. This is closer to real life for more people than we know. Thanks for the good read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Unique

A very good tale, with a unique ending. I really enjoyed it.

QuillmanQuillmanover 19 years ago
Poignant...

and quite moving.With best wishes to you,and kind thoughts to those who will feel alone during the Christmas holiday.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
speechless

I can rarely say that.

sacksackover 19 years ago
different and convincing!

I hope you win the contest, this is a very well thought out unusual story with a neat twist at the end. Bravo!

cookiejarcookiejarover 19 years ago
Beautiful...

Incredibly poignant! I felt the full range of emotions and the ending was perfect. Good luck on the contest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Outstanding and beautiful !!!

Absolutely wonderful and touching story!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
A true tear creator

So true to life that I almost feel I know Authur, and so touching an ending.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
Arthur here~

My little 6 inch tree for me and the cat has a new meaning..."Like putting lipstick on a pig"

very good story and thanks for the one liner!

I can only hope to have as fortunate a grasp on life.

Being from Texas I had chuckles with the accented words, really spiced up the read...thanks

Happy Holidays and good luck~

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very well written

All the best with the competition. You deserve to win for coming up with something so utterly different.

Rumple ForeskinRumple Foreskinover 19 years ago
Well done.

Well written with good character development. Should do well in the contest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Heartbreakingly beautiful

Just a wonderful and very different piece of work from my favorite writer on this site.

carsonshepherdcarsonshepherdover 19 years ago
Both sweet and sad.

A fitting end to Arthur's story. Wonderful!

Virtual_BurlesqueVirtual_Burlesqueover 19 years ago
From Mundane to Moving!

Your account of Arthur’s last Christmas makes a bittersweet story and provides the Angel of Death with something new for its repertoire.

logophilelogophileover 19 years ago
Not exactly a pick-me-up, but...

a well crafted story. Arthur was a loveable character! Thanks for sharing this.

davidwattsdavidwattsover 19 years agoAuthor
author's note

For those that I may have missed, as well as to those who commented anon, THANK YOU so much!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Damn good,

I can only wish it goes as well as this for us all.

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
well told

but such mixed feelings.

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