All Comments on 'Lisa'

More that was great

All young ladies should experience such uninhibited parents

I liked it but it have been better if the mom was there for her first time. Maybe a family threesome in a followup chapter?

Very very sick, all at the same time<

Would have been better if the mom had reclaimed the father after the motel trip. Let her indulge her daddy sex fantasies again. Or if mom had orally cleaned up her daughter's pussy.

Keep up the good work!

Made Me wish I could find a mother and willing daughter. Best of both worlds

A mother/daughter team is very much one of my favorite fantasies. Have both sleep with me, 3sum’s, I am so going to hell!

Lovely story wish i could have the same romance

Seriously moronic dialogue. Sounds like some mentally challenged kids playing. And written by one as well.

Waste of 1 star

DragonRider55

I truly wish my wife would give me the ok to take my daughter's virginity.

I've lusted after her teenage body for some time now,, but only have thoughts of

making love to her! As for this tale of Daddy/daughter incest, Ifind it to be well written and very detailed! 5 stars!

Plot is good but the dialogue you have given the girl makes her almost a child. Yes she is a virgin but she is, I would think, aware of the world around her. She is 18 and by then she should have heard some details about sex from her girlfriends. She is missing the earth of a young woman and acting more like a 12 year old..

Ada is a sick bitch imitating her daughter..

Let it just be daddy and lisa

Loved it wouldnt mind seeing more , maybe mom joining in

Lisa's dialog is a bit childish for an 18 YO girl. Also, Wife should have joined in . . . .

Couldn't understand the necessity for the pregnancy comments. Also the daughter's dialogue seemed to be eighteen going on fourteen. Wife should have either watched or joined in . . . .