All Comments on 'Lisa Needs It Pt. 04'

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francis_toliverfrancis_toliverover 8 years ago
Ewww

one star. Not for the cuckold content (I regularly give Xleg lover five stars), but because your story lacks anything resembling real characters or a real story arc or...well you get it.

Erotica can be very hot or it can be a skim to the end experience. Guess which category your story falls into?

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Well...

Did you notice that it's the fourth part of the story? Did you read the other parts?

Rc68Rc68over 7 years ago
Huge pile

Just a huge pile of cuck fag garbage with a cum dump skank lover.....

SamWarrensSamWarrensover 4 years ago
Moew!

Need more of this story! Please write more! Please let Lisa get pregnant with a black baby!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Disgusting ending to a story that went steadily downhill with each installment, ending with this cuck bullshit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Now you've done it. I have to go back to the previous parts and mark you down three stars on each one. Hope you're proud of yourself.

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