by Olddirtyman
one star. Not for the cuckold content (I regularly give Xleg lover five stars), but because your story lacks anything resembling real characters or a real story arc or...well you get it.
Erotica can be very hot or it can be a skim to the end experience. Guess which category your story falls into?
Did you notice that it's the fourth part of the story? Did you read the other parts?
Need more of this story! Please write more! Please let Lisa get pregnant with a black baby!
Disgusting ending to a story that went steadily downhill with each installment, ending with this cuck bullshit.
Now you've done it. I have to go back to the previous parts and mark you down three stars on each one. Hope you're proud of yourself.