All Comments on 'Lisa’s Summer Vacation Ch. 02'

You wrote another great Chapter about Lisa and how she was having fun for the summer. I like how she handled Peter at the beginning of the story and put him in his place about her being just a prostitute. I like how the development of the relationship with Jason was going through her mind and how she was starting to fall in love with him so it seemed. I can hardly wait for the next chapter to see which you do with her

While I enjoyed the first chapter {5 star rating},this one is far superior as it has developed Lisa,s character from being sexy to being likeable.Looking forward to the next instalment.

Being a teen definitely has it's rough spots. If I could have hired a Lisa for my son, hired a teacher instead of a piece of meat, there's no doubt I would have done it.

I liked this chapter much better than the first, as the latter was repetitive and filled with two-dimensional characters. Here the characters are more realistic and believable, with some development on the part of both of the main protagonists. I'm looking forward to more.

The writing on the first chapter was excellent but the story line was really over the top - just silly, although fun. This one was also well written with good character development and toned down the craziness. I really enjoyed it.