by spyro1123
ONE OF THE SEXIEST STORIES IVE READ THE BOTTLE IS A TWIST THAT I LOVED. THE WHOLE STORY IS WELL WRITTEN AND THE ENDING IS GREAT. YOU ACTUALY FEEL THEY FELL IN LOVE, OVERALL A GREAT READ. "JAKK"
Great story! Loved it! the bottle was perfect and the relationship well written. You did a wonderful job! I really enjoyed reading this and the sex was beautifully written. Keep up the good work! oh and awards to the editors! always remember the editors! :D
Another masterpiece of erotic literature by spyro1123! This was a sensual story that quickly heated up, with the magnificent twist of the wine bottle towards the end! This author continues to impress and I sincerely hope his fans will be supplied with many more stories in the future!
The plot was really fun. Loved the motorcycle. Loved the waxed pussy. The skinny dipping was fun. Loved the love. Dare I say that it seems odd to see such a well written female point of view from a male writer?
I think you could have spent a bit more time with them stripping for the swim.
You also left us teased a bit about the feelings she got riding the motorcycle.
I'm glad you had a link available for me to stumble upon. A very sexy read. Thanks, I enjoyed it very much. ~ Red
What an awesome mixture! I loved the hot sex and loved the growing affection. Just adorable....
very hot story... glad you had a link in your sig. would love to see more of these two!
I think they should have skipped the shower and she would have tasted a lot better!
Sick to some, I know, sorry . . . NOT!
I just love the scent of a woman and being shaved ya know how long it takes for her to get it ripened?
Mmmmmmmmmm! Or she could have shoved his head down on her and told him, shower AFTER you lick me clean and get me off FIRST!
Omg I read this to my boyfriend and we hard huge orgasms by the middle of them fuckin there brains out
The story was warm, sensitive, erotic, and tender. I loved the tempo and length. Great detail and filled with human emotion and raw sex, Thanks!
Reminds me of a time when years ago I took my own Lisa (real name) to a quiet spot on Lake Superior in northern Michigan. Woods, bright blue sky, beautiful waves coming in -- just us alone -- naked in the sand! Two young married college kids in love!! Thanks for the memories!!