by lauralifeisshort
I love the innocent build and the progression, along with several fantasies coming together in the one scene. Brilliant!
Nice writing and hope you are here to stay as a story Writer. Thanks
...with Chippyminton's comment, and I c o uldn't have said it much better using my own words! 5 stars, fully deserved!
What a wonderful story! Your words painted a fantastic image in my head of everything going on.