All Comments on 'Literature and Lust'

by SyleusSnow

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SmuttyandfunSmuttyandfun8 months ago

5 Stars! Well done!. Fun and sexy with a touch of danger. I really enjoyed it!

Ravey19Ravey198 months ago

Great. Didn't expect a short story like this to appeal to me but it certainly did.

FuddyDuddyDudeFuddyDuddyDude8 months ago

That was slick. Well written.

5*

FDD

monkeykinglivesmonkeykinglives8 months ago

How fun. Thanks for adding this to the mix. Five stars.

WifeWatchmanWifeWatchman8 months ago

Nice. Glad you submitted it for the challenge. 5*****

ArediaAredia8 months ago

Good twist! :)

raucousraucous8 months ago

Wow. That was so delightfully corny. "A classic for the ages."

Hardy66Hardy668 months ago

So creative! Well written.

goatman96goatman968 months ago

Too short - fun story but needs to be about 4 pages long.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Outstanding.

jtsubbyjtsubby7 months ago

Great story…follow up would be great. He’s now mesmerized and smitten, she has him where she wants him. She could easily own him, and helping him author his next best seller not realizing he’s writing his own demise, happily.

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