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GentleVikingGentleVikingover 11 years ago
Sweet

A lovely story...

Many thanks

bruce22bruce22over 11 years ago
Nicely done.

The Cro always turns out interesting romances, that sound like an unusual slice of real life.

JonATaylorJonATaylorover 11 years ago
Good Show

Pleasant read, easy flow and good characters.

curioussscuriousssover 11 years ago
A lovely story...

...but a tad rushed at the end.

Captivating there for a while though.

Thanks,

N

jenellesljenelleslalmost 9 years ago
Life is Rough

Very good. You captured PTSD which isn't just for combat vets. Anyone with a trauma can have it. I love his reaction at the end.

I love romance and especially happy endings. I really enjoyed this. It felt like they were real people. I've met both of them at one time or another.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
nice story of

two lost souls finding each other...somehow he needs to go beat the shit out of her mother for causing trouble then do the same to those two scum bags...but only 5 years for killing her baby...hope he gets plenty of vaseline as his ass will be well used....it took a long time before anyone would realise what PTSD was and thought it was about nothing...today we know more about it...they are good for each other....

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Brett

Brett needs a come to Jesus moment really soon.

Diecast1Diecast1over 1 year ago

Great story, love it. AAAAAA++++++

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