All Comments on 'Little Blonde Lifesaver'

The author doesn't know the proper commonly used slang by most all the world.

cum = orgasm/semen/sperm

cumming = having an orgasm

spunk = a form of behavior

Spunk in much of the world is the whitish fluid, often referred in these columns as jizz or as his cum.

Good story. Don't be so picky.

this fool has sucked more cocks than a $20 whore!! gave it a 5

A fun story. But in places, the fun was due to some grammar and spelling boulders strewn in the way of the telling!…First, “there in lied the problem”? How does a problem lie? “Lied” is only and ever the past tense of “lie”, the verb meaning to tell a falsehood! Otherwise, LIE [to recline] is conjugated LIE, LAY, LAIN; whereas LAY [to place] is LAY, LAID, LAID….Next up was “relived” [Sure, you can relive a moment; but what is this portending?]; it says “I was relived”. Perhaps a construed reference to a Lazarus moment? Or Easter and resurrection? Or a Hindu reincarnation as a Junebug? Or in this context of “petting” in which the person became “quite aroused”, is this a surge of lust such that his dormant dangler comes alive?...OK, so I was once an English teacher. But such matters can add up in annoyance then subtract in scoring!...Two fun characters, though, who may worthy to "relive" to see another story!

When is there going to be a sequel to this story! Are you planning on writing one?

There are one or two more stories coming involving Beth. They should better written, and more thoroughly edited. :-)

I really like the way you write, the sex feels real (and very hot) good work! Please send us more x