All Comments on 'Little Brother is Big'

This story is just awful. Too much to even list/comment on

Nice story - kinda quick but effective. I hope his sister wants to go again with his big cock and really show him some skills he needs to learn and her brother can bang him really long and hard and then feel some power squirts. Adfter all he needs to learn correctly and use protection too. More please. Thanks.

I have to say that I hope this becomes a series of sorts as would love to read more about these two but I have to also say that my biggest issue is that this was way to short but it held my attention to the end

Since they weren't calling each other 'Bro' and "Sis" all the time I liked it more than most. It was short but not bad at all.

I loved this story, it was blessedly short, can't wait to see where you take this.

Good premise but you seriously need a proof reader and some one to teach you that a sentence ends with a period not a comma.

I will try, to make this into a short series, but I have to think about where I want to take this first, I have a couple ideas, but, I have to iron them out first.

Whenever, I do a siblings story, they will hardly refer to each other as, brother or sister, the might be an odd bro's but they will mostly call each other by their names. I always think I never call my brother, brother, I call him Sam and he doesn't call me sister, he calls be Jess.

do us all a favor, and stop before you start.. 99% of the porn videos you watch are FAKE.. BIG COCKS are a fucking myth.. The Average cock is 4 to 6 inches..

This was a fucking waste of time to read.. asshole

I, got about, 6 sentences, into, this and ran, across about 472, commas, is this, enough, please learn, punctuation.

Why would she close and lock the door when no one else is home?

Did you buy them in bulk, or do, you have, a, comma, quota, that you, , have, to meet?

Too many errors of too many kinds to warrant a vote. If you continue writing, please get an editor.

Good ideas. Some girls have seen brother's dick and compare to boyfriends. sometimes other guys don't measure up and sister seeks fulfillment at home. .

Horrible, no build up and too short.

its not bad, it needs a bit of work tho.

take this story and give it some buildup, background and character presentation.

it could be really good.

I had no trouble reading and understanding your story. It was very enjoyable. Keep writing.

“Huh, what's going on?”

He just got his cock in a pussy for the first time ever, a moment every teenage boy dreams of, and he asked THAT? Silly.

Then again, there was brother/sister sex, so I still enjoyed this.

HOT!!!!!