All Comments on 'Little Lost Space Cadet'

Great start! Can't wait to see where it goes from here

Really good start, looking forward to more.

Hoping to see another chapter.

I love the new universe you've created! Your characterizations are pithy and flow with the plot. The plot is so engaging that I'm eager to read another chapter. Or, to read more stories of the Space Command dealing with perverse aliens.

You said it’s a one shot wonder. However there is no story here, it’s more a premise for a story.

Your imagination is in overdrive. Mind-reading tentacled hose beasts from another planet. Oh, Marla, what are you signing on to? If it's any consolation, you will see five shining stars as you're being tentacled silly.