All Comments on 'Little Mermaid Ch. 01'

Unfortunately, too true a story. Can recall a few anecdotal episodes in my coaching experience of young ladies as is the protagonist of your story. Hope the subject of your tale is on the 'other side' of her journey.

It's tough growing up!

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Loved the pun at the end!

Such a great story about a real problem. I've seen it in my daughter and a couple of her friends. This tale could have been written in text books about the care and feeding of young girls. I am assuming that there will be a follow up to this one that helps her overcome her insecurities and understands the outside beauty and the inner as well. Nicely done Sophie. I will follow to see the next chapter.

Interesting look at body dysmorphia and the tribulations of a young woman. This could go in some surprising directions.

You may draw some ire with that description of a football player. Plastic gorilla indeed.

Such a sad girl. When I was a young boy looking through playboy magazines in the sixties, I thought rounded girls were where it was at. Long legs came later on, as I matured. Poor girl has them in spades and doesn’t realize it. I hope she gets some confidence in later chapters. Kudos to the boy not running for the hills (yet)