All Comments on 'Little Miss Communication'

by KennyWright

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BenLongBenLongabout 13 years ago
Great story

Nice! can't wait for #2.

svenjollysvenjollyabout 13 years ago
Fantastic!

You really did something great here, weaving together excellent action, characters and story. Wouldn't mind seeing more of these two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Crushed on

eh? Is that English?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
It's good to see an author who knows ...

... the difference between "your" and "you?re." So many otherwise good stories are marred by poor English. Nice that your excellent story is an exception.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Cliffhanger!

That was great. I hope to read the second one soon. It was really great! I am so curious to see what her fantasy is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
FANTASTIC!

The only complaint I have is that I have to wait for another chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Don't!

quit here!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
liked it

You write very believable characters. There was some really great back and forth banter when they're folding towels. Keep up the good work.

BuckyDuckmanBuckyDuckmanover 12 years ago
Hot and Steamy

Okay, I couldn't resist making that title. Good job! I liked the way "Little" came across. She's fun!

LiveLocalLateBreakingLiveLocalLateBreakingabout 2 years ago

Wow, this was a treat to come upon. Great work!

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