All Comments on 'Little Packages Ch. 03'

Please keep going. This has been so fun to read.

Thank you.

But please skip the swingers club. A real daddy protects his princess from others, he doesnt share them.

such a good story ,well done

Part 3 was "Purrrfffect". Waiting for the "chaos" of the families in part 4.

I have run out of superlatives to use for your stories. They are perhaps the best written I have read on Literotica. Believable characters, believable dialogue, hot sex and even perfectly edited. Please keep going.

Thank you for writing this story. Love the all the characters.

So DDlg has never been my thing. But this story? Hot damn it could be my thing! 5*

Can’t wait to read more.

This is really one on the nicest love stories. Keep going, you're doing great!

Bravo, Sir!

I'd been checking almost daily, hoping the next chapter would be arriving soon. I am swept away by this story, and these characters. So great - maybe top 3 of all the things I've read here. I'm completely in love with Ashley - had no idea she was missing from my life. Many thanks, and I can't wait for the next installment.

First - Damn fine job!

Good story - no over the top turgid tools. Thanks for that. You are a good writer and you take us along for the journey. Good prose, great characters.

Please keep up the good work!

One hell of a series, short, but superbly written. Minor problem with a missing word here or there, but not so significant to distract one from enjoyment.

Yours is a story both well written and enjoyable. Keep up the good work.

Can't wait to see how you develop the story

Another fantastic installment to this charming story!

I'd also like to vote for skipping the swingers club; Ashley is too precious to share. Besides, she needs to get started on giving him the family he always wanted before he's too old to be an active father.

You know, this was a pretty good story...right up until you just had to insert the inapproriate and cheap political shot. Anyone reading on Literotica has no interest in your politcal opinions. You should find a different forum for that.

I love this story have just read a lot of other comments and all I can say is I agree.

Looking forward to the next installment it would be a shame to leave it unfinished.

I have really grown I to this story. You are doing a good job. Keep it up.

I agree, I don't want them to go to the swingers club. Monogamy please 🥺 also idk what "cheap political shot" that other commenter is talking about, I didn't notice anything. And anyway, a little politics to help contextualize canada for us non-canadians is helpful. Don't let that comment get you down 💓

I was looking around for something "spicy" to read and then i came across this and I just blazed through it I literally read the whole thing in less than an hour and my brain was like "do it again". The story is great, Ashley is just precious (i literally have no other way to describe her) and Ben is another great character and they both fit so well together with him being nice to her and well Ashley is Ashley need i say more? and then even the porn is amazing so yeah all around 10/10 best thing i have seen on this website

Love your characters, they are amazing and it is fabulous that you keep them true to what you set them up as originally.

One thing... There's been a few grammar things that drive me nuts and inconstancies. I don't usually edit anymore due to time constraints but if you want another set of eyes I love your story so much I'd be willing to make time to proof read. Just send a message if you want to take me up on the offer.

I can't get logged in but my username is 19kitten19 if you search it you should be able to message me.

Let me know if you want another set of eyes to proofread.

This is so good! Characters with flesh and feelings and a good chemistry together... They don't need to expand their experiences with others because they need each other more... this is the best part of this story... finding the right person for you. This doesn't mean they can't have lots of fun together! Can't wait for next chapters!🤗

Still one of the best chapters in the series. Such a natural progress of the relationship from meeting to falling in love. Wonderful series.

Another great chapter. Yes, some mangled words which detract but not too many. Might be worth getting a proof reader. Loved the way you draw out the characters to make them believable despite their flaws. 5 ⛤

I absolutely adore this story and cannot wait for the next installment. It's extremely well written, believable and just spicy enough to keep one's libido in high gear. Great piece...pun intended.

I haven't read further in the series yet and im loving the story and their romance, but the swinging talk really seems like it's gonna take a dark turn. I hope not and i'll see but with so much to already overcome it will be real difficult to unring that bell.

A little too much time and detail on the kitten scene, for me and this style of relationship has no room or reason for swinging. JMO so only 3 stars

I am not bothered by the swinging talk alone. It seems probable they will never go to the club.

Engrossing.

You have beef really good at keeping this going, not into pet play but a goo story well written

I am SO ENJOYONG this series...the pace is just right...the communication between Ashley and Ben is setting the right example for readers...anyone reading this should LEARN "something" from their interactions...

I know of a couple who were into the "little" play arena; they were incarcerated at the County Jail I worked at. The toll it took on them, being apart, is now very apparent to me (as it 'kinda' was at the time); we read the inmate mail...some of the stuff was really risqué and nasty...SHE seemed to be the more aggressive one to the officers, especially when she was reprimanded/disciplined for trying to talk to him...I realize she was protective of him, as Ashley is here with Ben...too bad they both went to prison, for long terms, and were gonna come out as sexual offenders with registration requirements...made bad decisions with kids involved in their "play"...

Maybe I should not talk about that...MY POINT IS that this stuff DOES happen in reality (not just a fantasy story like this). Judging them kinda fell into my view of them, mostly because of the molestation issues; what I am saying is that what people do on their own, do not hurt anyone else, be considerate and respectful...somewhat discrete...

A few readers here have issues with the 'tail' and the swinging aspects; okay, have an issue, keep them to yourself and go on. This is a fantasy...if that is not your thing, then leave it alone...some of the rest of us may have ideation about this...(???) Do you understand my point?

Going on to next chapter...the family thing is going to be entertaining, if nothing else...see how Ben's family, & Beth's mother, take the whole thing...I think it will be just fine!

Five*€5**Stars..again!!

Time warped again. Great writing. I’m not really into any of the fetishes in the story, but I am invested in the characters. Amazing writing, I have had real tears several times.

There's little doubt that this is one of the best, if not the best, series on this site. Every sentence is well-considered and serves its purpose in the development of the growth of the story. The sensitivity of the writing is evident throughout.

This series has totally sucked me in. It's nice having locations that I know.

Our lack of actually having the charge of "vehicular manslaughter" was very distracting for me, unfortunately. Logically, i know it's the easiest way to describe the situation. Emotionally... Totally butthurt that this does not exist here. It's a very difficult series of charges to add up to an equivalent. (But it still falls short).

Oh you do like your cliff hangers! Hope you have finished the series before I get there! It's going to suck having to wait on chapters.

Cheers

SAGE

[28.03.24]

"Let's put it this way, and excuse me for going philosophical for a moment, but do you believe there's an order to things, or that it's all just chaos?"

She looked more intrigued than confused. "For life, the universe and everything?"

Anyone who quotes Douglas Adams was always going to get a break from me."

ANY H2G2 references automatically renders a chapter 11/10!!!!!