by butterfly_lies
One of the most erotic Father/Daughter stories I have ever read. Quite simply one of my most favorites. I hope the author may consider continuing this story.
Just a few of the common items/themes in your stories--and they always seem to strike a nerve. The common character of the daughter in your stories--who always treads that line between innocent and sexy--becomes more rounded with each story. Very well-paced--I especially enjoyed the use of the clock and the extended teasing it helped signify. Only one thing--write another story already!
So slow, so teasing, so wonderful!
Yes, let's hear more about them - please!
Lucas
Wow, its rare that a story gets me so hot but this certainly did the trick, keep up the amazing writing!
This story has evolved, it just keeps getting better and better. I want to hear another fantasy. Share, you have no ideas what your words do to me.
honestly, i've never been much for "girl asleep taken by surprise" stories, but i liked this one very much, and i say "encore!"
all I can say is DAMN that was a hot story.. was it a dream? Who knows, and who cares.. great one..
Wonderfully erotic, well-written story - enjoyed it immensely.