All Comments on 'Little Red Ridinghood'

I need more adventures with tali and her wolves or just her!

i love it! you took a childhood story and twisted it so adults dont want to kill themselves every night at bed time. please continue on with Tali!

lol the ending slapped me in the face! u sick twisted bastered! lol keep up the good work!

i was bored and couldn't think of a way to end the story, I also just saw the remake of the Wolf man so maybe that why i ended it like that....P.S. blame my friend the editor. And would you like me to re post this story with grammar fixed

well sodomy also = ass fucking and having sex with animals among other thing

... but you mixed up "Tali" and "Tail" A LOT. The ending certainly was surprising, but it didn't seem to make much sense to me. On a technical note, the comment about sodomy was a bit off (sodomy = assfucking, NOT bestiality).

Can you please tell me some key areas where the grammar is off?

you could expand upon this with the friend and how she ended up in that predicament

Aside from the grammar problems... it was totally original.... A sick small part of me LOVED IT!!!!

Horrendous lack of proof reading.