by Originsunknown
You'd think they'd recognize each other's voices.
5 stars for a very hot sexy romp. There could be more if these two stay together and keep doing what they enjoy.
This is a hot story but it could be even hotter with more detailed descriptions of the threesome going at it. Your writing is good and makes your stories easy to read with a good flow throughout. Please write a Part II to enhance it and see where it may take you with the plot.
Nice story but i almost put it down when you said he sued the army and won. That is not how any of that works. Change it too he was medically discharged and now collects VA benefits.
Four star from me. I think I wanted more description of the sexual scenes. Otherwise quite good :)
Anonymous, I know it's a lot more involved, allow me artistic license? I write sex stories, not legally factual briefs, I know when I read I allow for that writers reality, in mine, sex can't give diseases, rarely get the girl pregnant (not my thing) and things happen the way I write about them.