All Comments on 'Little Sister College Fun'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Doesn't recognize her voice

You'd think they'd recognize each other's voices.

Frankie1952Frankie1952about 3 years ago

5 stars for a very hot sexy romp. There could be more if these two stay together and keep doing what they enjoy.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Hot but could be Hotter Still

This is a hot story but it could be even hotter with more detailed descriptions of the threesome going at it. Your writing is good and makes your stories easy to read with a good flow throughout. Please write a Part II to enhance it and see where it may take you with the plot.

Omart57Omart57about 3 years ago
Very hot

story, O! Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nice story but i almost put it down when you said he sued the army and won. That is not how any of that works. Change it too he was medically discharged and now collects VA benefits.

Phoenix_LusterPhoenix_Lusterabout 3 years ago

Four star from me. I think I wanted more description of the sexual scenes. Otherwise quite good :)

OriginsunknownOriginsunknownabout 3 years agoAuthor

Anonymous, I know it's a lot more involved, allow me artistic license? I write sex stories, not legally factual briefs, I know when I read I allow for that writers reality, in mine, sex can't give diseases, rarely get the girl pregnant (not my thing) and things happen the way I write about them.

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Been writing for a while, will be posting more, all that were mostly written for my wife. As much as I love feedback, be polite! As one of my readers pointed out, this is an amateur site, I'm no professional and write to arouse, not to make a living. Some of my stories have ...

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