All Comments on '"Little" Sister Pt. 04'

At times i felt like i was loosing the thread of this story. However... i seemed unable to put it down. I read literotica for the authorship. This story is an outstanding example. Awesome job.

well written , but tedious

no depth of character or emotion

nothing for the reader to get his/her teeth into

nothing to relate to or to engage the reader

may as well be reading a very well written instruction manual

or the weather forecast for the coming week.

.........

just spent the last few hours reading ch01 - ch04

sorry , am beat i will not be reading further

(still voted 5 stars , i just can't get into it)