All Comments on 'Little Witch Ch. 02'

Very good. This story has A LOT of potential; character development will be key. If you're in this for the long haul, you are definitely setting a good pace.

Keep it up! 😉

Sc8

Very good. This story has A LOT of potential; character development will be key. If you're in this for the long haul, you are definitely setting a good pace.

Keep it up! 😉

Sc8

Didn’t even realize u updated this so glad u did and that we got to see his POV. I’m curious why she can’t feel the bond and how young she is compared to him. Keep it up

Really loving where this is going so far!! I cant wait for the update!

Love your writing. This is the best I've read in a long time on here. I hope you continue with it soon!

So glad you kept going! I liked the first part but then couldn't remember the title or authors name, but was very happy to find this. I hope you continue. I"m interested to see what happens

More, more, more! PLEASE :D :D :D

Just stumbled across this story and am dumbfounded as to why yet another great beginning is abandoned! This is exactly why I have such a love/hate feeling for Literotica. While the comments after each chapter is a plus...l would truly prefer a policy of only completed stories posted. Perhaps that's the push budding authors need instead of incremental feedback.

Moreeeeee pleaseee

*sigh* Another great story with no ending. It’s like your favorite TV show being cancelled without a final season.