All Comments on 'Live Chicken Sandwich'

i give it a twentyfive for two reason very little heat plus the first part was boreing no sex at all.second you never describe the lovers they were ghost to the readers how we suppose to visualize these lovers with out knowing there hair colour,ete colour,height,weight,bust size,waist,hips as well as there cupsize.what race are they? these are important questions.which you failed to answer. you need to rewrite this story give real heat don;t take a page and a half to get to the action.

... for the idiot whose comments preceed this one. I recognize the idiot's writing style because he made the same comments about one of my stories. Takes too long for the sex... well dude maybe that's why you're always wacking off here instead of being with actual women; it's called foreplay and whether it's physical or literary a lot of people enjoy it. No bra and cup size... same thing pal. They don't mean very much and can't describe a breast except for those who only see them in the Penneys catalog. The story is just fine, it's some of these anons that need work.

While the story did take time to build, it also gave me type to understand the character. And when it did get to the sex, I was there in the room with a person, not just a body. Nicely done piece of erotica.

You gave us only enough description to force the reader to use his (or her) imagination. I liked your slow build-up.

This is one of the best stories ever posted here. The writing style is refreshing, lets us delve into the mind. There's nothing much to say except that I'm looking forwards to more from you.

This author's range and depth are stunning. She's sweeping through every category with uncanny dexterity. Where to next, Diva Haines?

I liked getting to know the story of the people before the story of the lovemaking.

Sometimes a good fuck is just so much better when it is real between two people.

I think I just fell in love with Lisa. This was fantastic. Thank you!

I especially liked the ending being vague about Lisa and Maggie.