All Comments on 'Live on Me Pt. 05'

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Tanalize over 3 years ago

Bruh, why did this make me cry?

Jessica deserves better

Layla: Is broken from being in previous toxic relationships

Also Layla: Dips when she is in a relationship with a wealthy caring person person who simps for them- to get london pussy

Radmatt0352 about 3 years ago

I have a few questions.

First, how did Layna develop this sense of purpose? She was full on uncertainty before? I feel I may have missed something

Second, Sarah seem real comfortable with Jessica, how did that happen?

It was not a bad ending, but I felt something was missing.

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I appreciate everyone's interest in my writing, and all the feedback and criticism. I'm glad that my writing could touch each an every one of you. I initially started writing my series, "Live on Me," as a way to express my deeper desires and fantasies. Being owned by someone...

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