All Comments on 'Living in the Moment'

You should have gone to Avalon or Stone Harbor. Ocean City is too family oriented. Nice story though.

Of my own story, now married 28 years to my wife 16 years younger than me.

Any chance of a second chapter, lovely story.

Another winner from trigudis. A few annoying spelling errors (Brent? Bent? Burt?), but nothing major. Nobody reads "A Brief History of Time" on the beach, unless they're trying to doze off.

Layla reminds me of my own special lady, who came into my life following my wife's death. We had no business being together, but for a year, we were. She was 25 years my junior, but her passionate lovemaking helped heal my heart and made me feel young again. Sexy texts and e-mails added spice. Thanks for the memories!

Like the characters and had tons of potential to continue

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Beautifully rendered characters. Touching, poignant, wistful, and ultimately hopeful. Thank you.

Touching, poignant, wistful, and ultimately hopeful. Very nice. Thank you

Loved it. Thanks

Readers have asked for one and I'm curious myself where Bryson and Layla go from here.

Where is the happy ending I seek? You ve left me hanging. No closure in this one.

I'm sure things like this really happen (as we learn from other comments), so why not enjoy the fantasy. I did. 4*