All Comments on 'Living the Life of Rylie'

The characters were well written. However, you should have worked on the ending a little more. It was too sudden, and a little bit of an emotional letdown.

Wow, wasn't expecting the pregnancy thing, and sudden marriage at the end, but I truly enjoyed the story, how refreshing for a woman to be treated with kindness during a sexual act. Thank you for sharing your talent, please write more stories.