by WellHungNerd1
Great characters, a hint of mystery, and the sex... well, you sir have earned your 5-out-of-5 stars!
Nice tale mate. I just hope you don't bring another dude into the group, that'd just ruin the whole thing.
I'm loving your story telling. It has everything great sex group sex anals romance and told in a way that makes me as a female reader want to be each of these women.
He's such a fantastic lover. Would love to have a go with someone like him. Well...hell long as I'm fantasising I'd want my husband to be like him. Gonna use this as brain food when I get my rabbit this weekend.
Am I the only one who would have immediately checked out the document labeled "escape plan" in the file room? That just seems to scream "read me" more than the page with girls ass rankings.
I'm sorry, if you're going to have romance mixed in with the sex - that deep intimate emotional connection that you portrayed him as having with Rosa - you've gotta earn it.
He's barely interacted with Rosa at all.
i've really been enjoying this story BUTT, i've also been waiting for the other shoe to drop. ya always gotta pay to play...maybe coming soon..why have an escape plan unless you need one? till then 5/5