by greytonesandredlights
Narrative was a little out of synch a couple times, but the story was solid and believable. I was hoping maybe she could have kids and Barry was the problem, but since his new girlfriend is pregnant, that plot line is likely dead. Hope you continue - maybe the sister crashed with boyfriend again (because she secretly is in love with her brother)? 5*
we loved it, resembled a porn shoot that was a good bit my partner just stated laughing which mad me smile and I mot saying what happened next. Looking forward to part 3.
But making Aunt childless hurt the story. Don't bring others into the story as participants.