All Comments on 'Living with Aunt Maureen Pt. 02'

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Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcabout 3 years ago

Narrative was a little out of synch a couple times, but the story was solid and believable. I was hoping maybe she could have kids and Barry was the problem, but since his new girlfriend is pregnant, that plot line is likely dead. Hope you continue - maybe the sister crashed with boyfriend again (because she secretly is in love with her brother)? 5*

kylady76kylady76about 3 years ago
what can we say

we loved it, resembled a porn shoot that was a good bit my partner just stated laughing which mad me smile and I mot saying what happened next. Looking forward to part 3.

NewOldGuy77NewOldGuy77about 3 years ago

Loving this series, can’t wait for part 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Good story but an editor would have been good

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

definitely bring the sister in next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago
Nice

But making Aunt childless hurt the story. Don't bring others into the story as participants.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Susan needs to have her way with him first

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I came to expand my erotic writing and figured I'd kill two birds with one stone. First person perspective and erotic (or sex scenes in general). I feel I've done this and must reduce my stories to significantly smaller ones. 2000 and less. Sorry I treat my writing like gestu...

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