All Comments on 'Living with Great Aunt Helen Ch. 02'

Wonderful. A fine continuation of the story. Some of the best new writing I’ve read on the site for a while. Very well crafted. Thanks.

Loving it

Even better than the first chapter. Excellent and believable writing and a full five stars!

keep on writing.

"As Helen had said, "Who knows where it might end?"."

I very much hope you'll let us know.

When will the threesomes begin? A foursome wouldn't hurt either... LOL

Unless this takes a major plot twist, I see the ending,,,, possibly two! Notwithstanding. your writers mind!

Imteresting story.... waiting to see your finish.....

Really enjoying this so far, though there are some definite parallels with the "Grandmother's bed" series. As much as I enjoyed the latter, I hope that this story will differentiate itself from its predecessor as it develops. Either way, I'm looking forward to the next instalment.

Definitely worthy of more installments.

Thoroughly enjoyed your stoey, how each chqra ter grew, the increase of tension and added situations… please continue!

Love the story. I think the story line is good and maybe it should go on for an chapter or 2. AAAAAA++++++

Absolutely 5 stars, if I could give 10 I would! Loved the first chapter and how you were

Great story!!!!!!!!!!!