All Comments on 'Liz Ch. 01'

Oh aI love where this looks like its going. Please continue and i hope you finally play with both these ladies

You desperately need an editor

You need to start a GoFune so you can buy some punctuation, and hire an editor. This is just awful.

I like your work. Please ignore the haters. If they are on this site looking for highly edited masterpieces they are in the wrong place.

I thought this story was about the disabled son and his mom...turns out it was about a queer computer nerd getting off on two women that he knows while hiding his identity....typical scumbag move...hiding your face but you know who the others are...lol....please do not ignore the haters...they have valid criticism regarding your story.

with regards to the phrase "haters"..only losers use that phrase...people who stand up and say "ignore the haters...really have absolutely any idea what they are talking about...nothing..nada...rien...zero....zilch..."

story should involve the disabled son and his mom...please don't do another bait and switch.....that's why you have so many negative comments. oh...and I think ken is secretly gay..he wants john.....let's be honest...thats why the author involved ken so much....he is gay and wants john....well, then add it into the story....the author really needs to have a better sense of direction for his stories...he is all over the place

Love to see the mom fuck Ken while John is in the same house and maybe ken fucks John as she watches and joins in then have a wild foursome both mothers and sons together

I've read and enjoyed your work. I think you should continue the story, perhaps she makes her son happy, perhaps a three way or kens mom gets some from her and Ken.MANY possibilities here! Good luck!