All Comments on 'Lockdown Christmas Miracle Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
MORE!!!!!!!!!

WE NEED MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks

gametime279gametime279over 3 years ago
Loving it!

I'm really enjoying this series so far. I can't wait to see where the story takes all three of them.

Ed19611961Ed19611961over 3 years ago
Thank you

Thanks for the quick turnaround. So, you're obviously an engineer, or you just have some really weird kinks regarding working with cables and PVC.

muskyboymuskyboyover 3 years ago

Way too slow paced

Wash2015Wash2015over 3 years ago
Going well

I am enjoying the story and I don't mind the slow build up. It helps to fill out the characters and the story's world.

My only real complaint is that each chapter is so short, just starting to slip into the story and the chapter is over

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Still enjoying the build...5*

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

No sex. But boy they are ingenious I'm thinking of using this as a handyman guide " things to do around the home"

shollingshollingover 3 years ago

I love the slow realistic bonding and build up. 5

DocWordsDocWordsover 2 years ago

I’m loving this!

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Posted four very different stories this month based on the 750 Word Challenge. Please take the time to read (won't take long) and upvote if you enjoy them! Still working on some longer projects, which may/may not get placed here. Appreciate all the support you've given my s...