by jhealy55
awful amount o0f "Bild up" though well done .Looking forward to the next chapter.
(before Christmas please)
This story is smoking hot ,so hot my crotch just spontaneously combusted ! I’ve always been a rock and roll kinda guy , but my balls are feeling the blues , so when are you gonna get another chapter out ?
Still running strong - love the gentle escalation in their relationships... 5*
This is so good, so right I'm getting carried away reading it, sitting here in freezing scotland dreaming of the summer holidays I never had because of this cursed virus. Roll on vaccine . Let's hope 2021 is better for us than
2020 has been.
Yet another masterpiece! Love the slow build up.
If I was the father then I'd be so damned proud of my kids for how they pulled together and worked their butts off to do nice things for each other, that I'd forbid the ski resort or the beach resort be removed and ask the kids to assure their structural integrity and make them permanent. The wife would just have to deal with it.5 stars.
Good stuff -- the incidents are inventive yet plausible, and you've packed in lots of detail. Boobs fetish, however, isn't working for me -- maybe more suitable to a visual medium than a written one? Regardless, though, first-class erotica.