All Comments on 'Lockdown Christmas Miracle Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

awful amount o0f "Bild up" though well done .Looking forward to the next chapter.

(before Christmas please)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Next installment please. Well done so far. The story has been enjoyable.

LostintheteaseLostintheteaseover 3 years ago

I love this story. Keep the chapters coming.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Ouch

This story is smoking hot ,so hot my crotch just spontaneously combusted ! I’ve always been a rock and roll kinda guy , but my balls are feeling the blues , so when are you gonna get another chapter out ?

thedayafterthedayafterover 3 years ago

Still a very good story which is building nicely. Keep it going...

Demosthenes384bcDemosthenes384bcover 3 years ago

Still running strong - love the gentle escalation in their relationships... 5*

DevilbobyDevilbobyover 3 years ago

This is so good, so right I'm getting carried away reading it, sitting here in freezing scotland dreaming of the summer holidays I never had because of this cursed virus. Roll on vaccine . Let's hope 2021 is better for us than

2020 has been.

shollingshollingover 3 years ago

Yet another masterpiece! Love the slow build up.

If I was the father then I'd be so damned proud of my kids for how they pulled together and worked their butts off to do nice things for each other, that I'd forbid the ski resort or the beach resort be removed and ask the kids to assure their structural integrity and make them permanent. The wife would just have to deal with it.5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good stuff -- the incidents are inventive yet plausible, and you've packed in lots of detail. Boobs fetish, however, isn't working for me -- maybe more suitable to a visual medium than a written one? Regardless, though, first-class erotica.

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