by jhealy55
This part, though still pretty tame, earned at least 7 stars.
Though obviously they will all get to have actual sex eventually, you’ve done a great job of capturing their emotions along the way.
Please, more...
To awake on Christmas morning and have the story be posted (and today was so hot) was a great gift. Thank you
I love where this story is going the character development is awesome I can’t wait for more chapters.
You are doing an incredible job - The internal conflict, the passion, the slow descent into acceptance is all great. Only thing missing is how they truly feel about each other. Emily clearly has an "un-sisterly" attraction to her brother that i'd like to see her admit beyond just sex. Will Cassie come to realization that her brother may be "the one" she's always tried to avoid? Questions to get answered for sure! 5*
My wife and I are always patiently waiting for the next chapter in this well built up tail. Thank You for the Holiday Spirit!
Still a great story, really keeping it alive and the sexual tension growing between the siblings. Loving it.
To be serious here you are now up to ten stars the tension you are building in to this tale of increasing sibling awareness is something a lot of mainstream novelists may envy.
'Ellie stepped over to Eric and wrapped her arms around his long torso as she rested her face against his chest and listened to the mighty thumping of his heart as it slowed gradually.'
I am honestly unsure whether I'm more frustrated with you or with Eric for failing to take the positively golden opportunity to sneak a forehead kiss in following this line.
Regardless, I'm still greatly enjoying the story and looking forward to more!