by jhealy55
Love the way you write......I was there......I was in the moment......This was a wonderful New Year present......thanks you so much.!!!
That chapter was amazing. Im glad to see that taking the extra day or so is helping keep the character names in order better this time. Keep up the great work. Cant wait to read the next chapter and see what unfolds in the future.
I have enjoyed every chapter of this story, and find myself looking forward to the next one. The character development is great, the details are perfect and the evolution of the relationships is exciting.
The build up has been torture. This wasn't simply screwing around or sex. This was foreplay to them making love. And it was written incredibly!
Your story took me back to my youth. Thank you. the words were so much with meaning. Please write more chapters . await them to never end.
You may be the best writer on this forum. I love this story. More soon please!!
Amazing journey you’re taking us on. I can’t wait for more chapters. Great job!!!!
Just great. It's a slow cooker, but I'm loving every moment. Can't wait for the next one, but I guess I'll have to...all the stars.
Love the story, please keep going. I really liked your Quarantine in Neverland series, but I'm really hoping this one goes further than oral sex between the siblings.
Love it......I am there......Your writing style reminds me of YOUBADBOY (one of the authors in here)........lots of detail, teasing, foreplay and anticipation.!!!!
I look forward very much to read more from you....thank you!!!
I'm very glad to see we've finally gotten kissing properly integrated into Ellie's and Eric's relationship. I'm also loving the developments between Eric and Cassie, though I can't help feeling that Eric's dismissal of Lisa as a romantic prospect seemed a bit...shallow?
I still have my fingers crossed for a bi awakening between Ellie and Cassie, though that doesn't seem likely at this point. (Please? Pretty please?)
All else aside, I continue to enjoy your story immensely and await a fresh installment with bated breath!
Excellent writing and buildup! My opinion is colored of course by my own experience - my sister had a Cassie body and an Ellie personality.
Another fantastic chapter in this steamy novel. Again, thank you so much for your time and effort into this wonderful tale.