by jhealy55
This keeps getting better and better ! I check more than once a day for more comments and the hope the next chapter is posted. Thanks.
I'm still a bit confused by the Cassie/Cali distinction, and very confused by the apparent connection between humiliation and arousal for her, but all is forgiven now that we're getting some real indication of sexual tension between Cassie and Ellie. Looking forward to more!
You're playing us readers like a fiddle - simply outstanding work. It's hot, believable and progressing in both story arc and character development. I'm still hoping for a little shift to more relationship development/progression beyond hormones running amuck. 5*
The more I read, the more I want. Love how you're drawing this out. Excellent work!
I've been on this site for a long time and I've read a lot of stories. This is one if the best thought out series I've ever read. You really know how to lead up to things! I never would have thought Eric would have gotten Cassie/Cali to first base! Thanks for the great stories, I hope to see many more.
The Cassie / Cali angle is brilliant completely believable that it would work. Repressed people need a reason/excuse to let go.
I agree with the previous anonymous commenter completely, the Cass/Cali was really well done. The last bit of this chapter does seem to break from the party line though. While I believe Cali would have played with Ellie, I thought Cassie was far from ready for something like that.
Also thinking Ellie's repetitive blackmail of her siblings (remember "Come massage my front or I'll tell Cass you got a woody") is going to come back to bite her one of these times.