by jhealy55
Nice. Not as scorching hot as Chapter 17, but I guess things need to cool down a bit before ramping up for the end. Thanks for still working on this to bring the story to its conclusion. I want to see a happy ending for these characters! And I'm surprisingly invested in Cassie's research career--a great way to show that exploring her submissive side and kinks does not lessen her.
The Lisa subplot I find much less interesting. I think if we were supposed to care about her, she needed to be introduced earlier in the story, and do more than game with and pine for Eric (for example, something from the game could give him an idea for something to do with the Christmas Miracles).
There's another Cassie/Ellie glitch in this chapter, on page 3: "Ellie whimpered as she felt her sister's tongue…" (I'd go with "She" here, since Cassie is clearly established as viewpoint for this passage.)
You're killing me here! Still doing amazing job balancing hot sex with feelings that mimic real life, given their situation. 5*
I have been following this a series since the beginning. This is by far the best i have read on here. Please keep up the great work. You are a very gifted writer. Thank you
This story is so delicious. Please keep it going. Eric has to fuck Cassie soon.........
Looks like getting closer to penetration! Nice hold off. Maybe time to introduce Lisa to the sisters? See if Eric can handle all of that. This is one of the best series I've ever read. Thanks!
I don't know which sister I like more. BTW, are they still going to make the hot tub
Only two chapters left - hard to wait, yet hate the thought of this ending. Definitely bookmarked for future rereads!
Been following this since 01, I eagerly watch for the next chapter.
You are so gifted at writing, I can actually picture Ellie and Cassie, and even wish they were my sisters!!!!
Easily the best series on here, please keep it going.
Re: Chekhov's package
I'm pretty sure that was the costumes they used for the strip club show.
What is Cassie's research? What happens with Lisa? Such a good story. Now I've got to read he rest of you collection. Love your work!!!
Still loving this story but still concerned that the siblings haven't really committed their emotional love to each other.
How does Lisa fit in. Who is she is she a real girl. I can't remember if Eric knows the physical Lisa whether he's met her at college or does he just know her online.
I'm going to be seriously disappointed if Eric, Ellie and Cassie don't end up in a life long full on loving relationship when this series ends
I love that you're adding to the plot line so far into the story. Lisa, and now this new research project, add depth found lacking in the vast majority of stories on this site. I look forward to seeing where you take this. No rush at all. (Actually, I was a bit disappointed with the stripping party. Too much, too fast.) Anticipation is everything;)
Hard to see how Cassie can concentrate on her project whilst her brother's
Hard dick is down her throat, so Hard. Also with Ellie Hardly ever dressed,
so difficult even very Hard
Regarding lisa, she must remain distant surely, as they and we are still in lockdown