All Comments on 'Locked Out!'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

That was a fun story…

Thanks for sharing, Jackie

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Not well developed.

Boring.

TotzmanTotzman11 months ago

I enjoyed this story! I loved how the embarrassing moments just kept coming for poor Phoebe.

Probus888Probus88810 months agoAuthor

For those who enjoyed this, Phoebe experiences further humiliations in 'Phoebe's Pooping Problem'. She also appears (nude)! in 'Changing Room Inferno: 750 Words'.

nighthawk22204nighthawk2220410 months ago

She should have given her number to the courier. He would have given her more assistance than anyone else.

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I write stories mostly for my pleasure with a plot-line and I prefer stories which have believable motivations. My main focus seems to be erotic horror, somewhat inspired by H.P. Lovecraft, but I do write in other categories, too. Yes, I know tentacle-monsters etc. aren't real...