All Comments on 'Locked Together with Mom'

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HeyAllHeyAllover 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for reading. I hope you've enjoyed this, and please support your local shopping mall.

heyall

legsfeettoeslegsfeettoesover 3 years ago
Where?

Where is this manor? I want to visit it! A very hot story for Halloween. Five stars. These are my kind of ghosts. Casper is O.K., but these ghosts are far beyond friendly - they're intimate!

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 3 years ago

Different but enjoyable. Thanks for the early Halloween gift!

Cheers

SAGE

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
great

Fantastic story, Well built up. And so so hot. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
My 2 cents

5 stars! I liked this story and hope you might continue it. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Omart57Omart57over 3 years ago
Hey, HeyAll!

Happy Halloween, Great story!

papabeardougpapabeardougover 3 years ago
I just loved this story

Fantastic story too say the least. Love and believe the super natural.

Papa Bear

SchakaSchakaover 3 years ago

Nice! I'm a fan of incest stories where relatives either unknowingly or are forced into sex. Well written and good development

jsmangisjsmangisover 3 years ago
Fantastic Story!

I have long been a fan of your stories and this is one of the best I've read. Keep up the great work.

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Well written with the action developed in a manner to keep the reader pressing onward to each new sentence. HeyAll, you are one of the best authors on this site, and this story only solidifies that status. Another installment or chapter is necessary to let the mother and son have their "talk" and let the readers know how they work things out.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 3 years ago

Wow! Great tale, great tail!

chytownchytownover 3 years ago
Spooky HOT Sex****

Very original storyline. Thanks for sharing

Ironman52Ironman52over 3 years ago

Waaay cool ghost story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Not at all what I was expecting.

I thought it would be something similar to that Ghost Hunters show where the investigative team spends the night in a supposedly haunted location with night vision cameras, detection and other recording equipment. This was really good though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Yep

I was going to leave a comment telling you how much I enjoyed your story but I read the other comments and all I have to say is ¨ Yep ! What they said ¨ .

MrBill36MrBill36over 3 years ago
Wow!

How appropriate for this time of the year. It’s just a couple weeks from Halloween and I find a great story like this. Such imagination. I am totally entertained and appreciate your efforts that went into this story. Thanks again. I do have one question though - why did you not have the son clean up his mother too.

thecarolinadreamerthecarolinadreamerover 3 years ago

VERY DIFFERENT AND VERY GOOD! ***** CD

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesover 3 years ago
Family needs to donate to Pice benevolence fund

In order to complete the investigation the family needs to donate the house to the detective and son as part if the police benevolence fund so the Lady and her son can return the riches and return the family to the status and fun of past

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Holiday Follow Up

Great story, would love to see a Thanksgiving or Christmas follow up with this mother & son duo with the rest of their family around them at the dinner table

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
Amazing story!

Would there be another chapter?

Like how come she personally been requested. Or that maybe she A distant relative to the family? Better let how she and her son look like The Lady and her son?

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Awesome story. I love ghost stories. I've read many but none this erotic. A few more pages was definitely required. For some reason the mother-son duo comes back with a supernatural healer in the evening to clean the house. Instead they, including the healer, get caught up in the forced sex again and it goes on through the night. In the morning when Ed and his mother return home, she discovers that she is pregnant. Is that Ed's baby or the healer's or does it belong to the GHOST? Now that is the riddle the detective has to solve?

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