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The fingers inside her curved upward, hitting her elusive g-spot, and with a final series of laps around her clit it was too much, and her body arched as she exploded.
One of her struggling hands managed to find someone's wrist, and she clutched it desperately.
Her toes curled, and her body arched into the hands of her teammates as she tried to fire a thousand signals at once. Her keening wail pierced the echoing chambers of the shower area, and everyone cheered on the sounds and sights of Erin's first cum in the locker room.
"Fuck," she managed to gasp when the feeling subsided.
The girls laughed and returned to their respective showers, while Erin could feel fluids gently seeping from her spent pussy. She felt Valentina rub her fingers through her hair, telling her that it was going to be okay, and that she'd help her shower.
Erin breathed a sigh of relief, knowing she wouldn't be judged for having a massive orgasm in front of everyone. In fact, she was certain it would make her one of the most popular girls on the team.
Epilogue: Erin Finds Her Place
The College Admission Scandal was continuing to play out and, sadly, two other women on the team had to be removed. The hunt for replacements was in full swing and they had already found one new girl.
"I'm on it," the Coach said over the phone to the Dean. "Yes, I understand, sir... Yes, we'll be ready for the game. There are plenty of talented women I'm looking at right now."
Leaning back behind her desk, the beautiful Coach enjoyed the sight of Erin on her knees, who was mostly undressed, providing oral service. Practice was starting in 20 minutes and the door was wide open. Banter was already lively amongst the soccer team.
The Coach added, "Yes, I'll keep you informed on any updates. See you then, bye."
When the call ended, the Coach was nearing her climax and guided her pupil.
"Slip your tongue in. Back to my clit, that's right. Stroke me with your soft mouth. Such warmth and skill."
Wearing only her bra and panties, Erin continued her dutiful work. She had just been called in a moment ago while she was undressing at her locker.
"Thanks for doing this," the Coach said, returning her attention towards her desk, which had files of different recruits she was looking at. "You're helping me think with a level head. I've got a big decision to make."
Erin gave a broad, meandering lick. "You taste good. It's a pleasure. And I'm sure whoever you pick will be the best girl for the job."
"I have an eye for talent. I knew you'd fit right in."
The Coach smiled as Erin licked and sucked. Sensing an impending orgasm, Erin plunged her tongue deeper, roaming upwards between little thrusts to add strokes across her engorged clit. Just the way she had been taught by the girls of the team.
Following the beautiful Coach's preference, Erin kept on sucking, slurping up all the fluids. It was a thing of pride, Erin had come to learn. The Coach saw it as a sign of great respect that her players were willing (and eager) to eat her cum.
"Practice is starting soon," the Coach sighed. "Thank you, dear."
Erin blushed. "My pleasure."
The locker room was bustling now before practice. Half-naked young women were everywhere. Erin went to her locker, barefoot and in her undergarments, like it was no big deal.
To her surprise, the new girl was right next to her. Shy as can be.
"Hi, I'm Erin."
"Mindy," the new girl said, extending a handshake.
They briefly exchanged polite banter, and they knew they'd wind up becoming great friends eventually, while Erin stood there in her bra and panties, and Mindy was still in her normal clothes, having just finished a Literature class.
With time of the essence, they had to change into their uniforms. Erin casually slipped off her bra and panties, standing completely naked while organizing her uniform and gear.
When she sat down and leaned over to put on her socks, she could feel the eyes of the new girl, discreetly peering over her nude body, wondering how someone could be so unabashed.
Rising from the bench in only her socks, Erin now picked up her sports bra and slipped it on. She smiled at the new girl.
"It's okay," Erin said reassuringly. "I can tell you're new to locker rooms. I was like that too a while ago. You get used to certain things."
Mindy squinted. "Thanks so much. Yeah, I'm kinda nervous. And there's something... around your lips. I think you have lip gloss smeared."
"I had a meeting with the Coach a moment ago," Erin smiled, licking her lips and wiping around her mouth using her hand.
The new girl finally got completely naked, just as Erin finished putting on her uniform.
"See you outside. And afterwards, I'll guide you when it comes time to shower. Trust me, it's a jungle in there."
Erin confidently breezed past the myriad of naked women remaining in the locker room to take her well-earned place on the field.
The End
Co-written by the supremely talented mandarinandbasil.
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- COMMENTS
Lesbo002 months agoThis is probably the best story i have ever read. I managed to hit climax without even touching myself, didnt know that was possible.
WillRightForSex11 months agoWhat a top-notch, excellent story. Wonderful writing, descriptive. You took the time to build to a fitting climax. :)
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Anonymousabout 5 years agoVery erotic and intense story, really descriptive and vivid, full of kinky, juicy details. Great build-up and characterization too. My favorite parts were:
"Erin gulped. "The thing I saw yesterday with the Coach and Morgan... how common is that sort of thing, exactly? The other girls seemed so... so... carefree about it."
"It all depends on the mood of the team. So what if they wash each other's hair in the shower? Or they share a tongue here and there. We're all adults, right? The girls work super hard. They're entitled to their forms of relaxation."
Sharing a tongue? Erin felt her pussy clenching and it nearly made her legs cross in the process. This was a lot to handle, and for a moment, Erin considered running back to her dorm room to shower. But that's totally against team spirit."
And
"Someone brushed over her pussy and her body arched up, but she was still pinned by Valentina at her legs and two girls who had moved to work on her arms.
Erin wasn't wondering anymore if this was normal. She didn't care. She needed it to continue.
Her teammates kept working around her labia and her nipples were rolled between soapy fingers. Fingers! She wondered what happened to the scrubs, and why they weren't being used on her small tits. But frankly, she liked the fingers better.
Water was splashed over her body. She knew that the soap was being rinsed off, but she didn't want this to end. Valentina's fingers were still busy though, so Erin stayed still, hoping for contact again.
The water ceased. She could still feel where Valentina knelt by her calf, and another presence invaded the space between her legs. Their fingertips brushed her ankles and began to slowly run up the inside of her thigh. Her breath quickened and she felt another set of hands caressing her stomach, kneading gently, then move to her breasts. She heard the motion of sitting next to her head, and a new hand twined into her hair while its pair moved to rest on her neck.
"This is part of the massage," Valentina said. "Think of this as a core massage, which is equally as important as your legs or arms. Whatever you feel, just relax. You're in good hands, literally."
Erin squirmed a bit when she felt a tongue pass over her labia and she arched up again, this time so fast she jostled the girls holding her. The tongue made another sweeping pass, then flicked at her clit. Erin's eyes shot wide open, but she was too afraid to look at who was doing what. God knows who else in the shower was watching, but she was certain it was a lot, if not most of the team.
The tongue sought out her clit again, more demanding than before.
"Aahh!"
It was more of a cry than a moan. She laid there, pinned and held as the tongue and its owner continued their assault. Breathing at this point was near impossible, and all she could manage were ragged, shallow gasps.
She felt a gentle bite to her shaved mound as two fingers entered her. Her hands struggled to grasp onto something, anything, while her body twisted and begged for more. The intrusive fingers explored inside her and the mouth drifted unhurriedly back down to her clit. She felt it sucking at her, licking around her lips, back to her clit, and she struggled again.
"Please," Erin whimpered.
She was so close.
One of the hands on her stomach shifted, and suddenly she could feel her stiff pink nipple being teased with someone else's mouth.
All the while, Erin had gotten the confirmation that lingered in her mind. She heard the voices in the background, in between the sounds of the showers running, discussing what they were seeing.
"What a lucky bitch. So fucking hot!"
"I need a turn with the fresh meat. Maybe next time."
"With a mouth like that, I need Erin to eat me before a big game.""
So fucking hot. Keep up the great work, you are very talented. This story really turned me on.
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Anonymousabout 5 years agoHi, I really liked this story and the buildup to the end. Not too short and you put lots of detail in there. I can't wait to read the next story. I hope there's another part to this one :)
Anonymousabout 5 years agoin the shower, with her orgasmic scream. Anyway, I think that she and Mindy just might be friends. More episodes please.
Anonymousabout 5 years agoThanks for posting. There has been a dearth of good stories recently and those that could have been good were too short.
So, thanks again.
