by sneaky_lola3
It's funny, with each chapter I'm very curious how much is real or fiction? Honestly though (and this is just from my own interest) these last two chapters have been great reads, but not the kink I search out on here. This is not a negative, I'm very invested in the story.
Once again...I look forward to the next chapter.
why you call yourself 'sneaky' Lola! :) Interesting, the way your competitive instinct and your need to exert some sort of dominance...anywhere...have combined to make you a switch in this way. I guess you get revenge where you can! Nicely written.
~B
Man... this is one of those stories where it all seems too fucking real. Especially the professor explaining why his sex life with his wife has declined. This shit kinda hurt my heart. Couldnt fap and didn't finish the story, I think I am going to try to quit this shit.
Amazing story, your best yet. Would love to have a story concentrating on Mari set after this one.
The way she dressed and moved and spoke revealed an almost primal understanding of the male psyche.
you bet sweet lola has gone through a lot of pain,embarrasement and self realisation her harsh experience explained her true definition of a alpha male a lion who conquers ,plunder, and left the prey to ruins with no guilt and concern for the prey and once she understood the alpha the subordinates beta ,omega male are easier to be deciphered
it seems like alpha men have turned lola into an alpha woman confident ,sexy ,clear thinking,manipulative with almost zero confusion and remorse
now she might dominate even the alpha guys if she desires
the tatto remark was so funny when his wife told that two are more than enough to handle he didnt get it poor guy thinks she is talking about the no of kids ;)
another brilliant piece from you
from lolas pov how she grew from a guilty abused confused teenager to a scheming ,powerful ,strong,manipulative seductress
her pov about grants seduction of mari and professer tricked to cuck was brilliant
now after witnessing mari a fully grown adult housewifes downfall she might stop blaming herself and stop slut shaming herself as she was naive weak timid confused teenager when these men abused her ,conditioned her to a sizequeen slut
awsome,erotic and a must read for all people out there especially an eyeopener for naive adolscents both girls and boys who are just getting aware of their sexuality and the world of sex , domination ,lust and longing
5/5 stars brilliany execution
Dearest Lola
Every man worth of of being defined masculine should have the chance to have you, or a piece of you.
Sometimes you are Heaven on Earth.
A brilliant writer. A brilliant human being.
Jo
I enjoyed your experiment with writing 2 perspectives. You voiced the Professor well, and closing the chapter with his experience was effective and added depth to the story.
Women have disappeared from this earth without a trace for far less. Why shouldn't these two feel the same way?