All Comments on 'Lolly and Kevin'

by R410a

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BarryJames1952BarryJames1952over 4 years ago
Very nice

Loved the story and the characters. Excellent work! 5* all the way.

bigbob2406bigbob2406over 4 years ago

Lovely story, thanks very much!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Once again

Super as we’ve come to expect

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loved this story on so many levels.

I very pleased you wove a story of an intelligent, loving and successful woman of color and left out the stereotypes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Another wonderful...

Another wonderful story. The category didn’t matter, it could have been both. More importantly you wrote a phenomenal story of love and life. Always a pleasure to read.

linnearlinnearover 4 years ago
Beautiful Story

As always you deliver a great story filled with tender and touching moments but also arousing sex. I am always surprised when seeing the a mother wants nothing to do with their child after birth, it breaks my heart every time.

oldsage_1oldsage_1over 4 years ago
Did it again, 410!

What a wonderful story. Some folks write about sex with just enough story mixed in to get from romp to romp. You spin an absorbing story with just enough romance included to publish it on this site.

Of course 5*'s!

brick_stonebrick_stoneover 4 years ago

Great story

I wish it would continue

muskyboymuskyboyover 2 years ago

Loved this one, so romantic. Wish they had some kids though......

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