All Comments on 'Loneliest Man Who Ever Lived Ch. 01'

Different, odd, yet interesting enough to watch for more from you.

Maybe she will push Harry into the water!

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Harry's characterization is a bit self-indulgent! The dubious nature of his higher IQ has been tammed down on two accounts: first, his extraordinary IQ served as a double-edged sowrd; human interactions or cooperations are often deemed to be banal or tedious, yet his " skills" may be used in relationship as a means to an end. He can see flaws, defects, irregularities in the world, yet no further "capabilities" to reform or improve "things". The convoluted hierarchy of logics over emotion can also be weaved into the story! His jarring isolation is a bit presumptuous and a bit of exploration of it could introduce the allure!!

Interesting start - on to next chapter. 4*

I know what you mean.